Changes in our thriller

We pitched our thriller idea again to Matt, and we decided that we wanted to alter the thriller plot slightly in order to give it more of an enigma. We decided that instead of the woman being in the car when the man is killed, she leaves the car and tells him she needs to go and get her phone. We then see cross cutting of the woman walking out of the car park and sending a text, and the man with the briefcase entering the car park as she leaves. We see them meet at the door and the woman smiles at the man with the briefcase, this still creates the illusion that the woman is innocent. We then hear the man in the car being shot, and the mans head hit the steering wheel and the car horn creates a loud and shocking sound. We then have a match on action shot of the woman getting out of the car park, with the sound of the car horn still in the background, and then she gets into another car which is already waiting on the ground floor, and is handed an envelope. This signifies how killing this man was just another one of her missions and how she is an agent of some sort.