Changing our idea

The main criticism we got were:

· There was no guarantee the weather would be good enough to film the whole opening in a drive in.

· There would need to be a bigger punch line at the end as something needs to happen, otherwise there would be an anti-climax.

· A big projection of a 1950's film would be difficult to recreate and to make it look like an American drive in.

· We were advised to take our main strengths of the idea and update them into a more realistic stetting.

Our new idea:

We wanted to keep the three characters, the couple and the villain; we thought this was our main strength as we could still create binary opposite atmospheres in each car. The couple drive to a car park and have a conversation; the woman is sweet and flirty towards the man. The mysterious man spy’s on the couple, and sends a text to someone. The woman checks her phone but we cannot see the screen, the couple carry on talking, and the woman types 'now' on her phone and goes in to kiss the man as she presses send. A gun target goes over the couple as she leans in, she looks straight at the camera and gives a subtle signal. Suddenly the mysterious man shoots the man in the back of the head, and the woman calmly gets out the car and walks towards the other man smiling.