Changing our opening

After having multiple discussions with Matt and Luke we have decided to change and develop our thriller idea.

We have kept the same theme of our thriller but have changed certain details. We have decided that the woman has fallen in love with the 'target' and her boss decides to go forward with mission as he knows she is 'in too deep' and he aims to kill both of them as a consequence of her betrayal.

Our idea starts with the couple in the car 'loved up' with series of shots that show her looking at her phone reading a text saying 'are you ready?'. We see her ignore the text but looks at it multitude of times and then tells the target that they have to leave . The boss decides to go in for the kill anyways and kill her with the target. The woman sees the boss' car and she knows that they are going to shoot. She ducks and rolls out the car without being shot. The 'target' gets shot and dies. The boss leaves without realising she is still alive. We feel this will benefit us as we will be able to develop our characterisation better and the kotives for our characters actions will be clearer also, it will feel more like a thriller and will therefore target our audince better by having a killing in the sequence.